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walker
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0 posted 2002-02-22 02:34 PM



You are consciously
on my mind
I see you when you're not around
I light a scented candle
and it smells like you
I cry for you
In the dark I yearn for you
and when you're here
so close to me that
I can hear your heart beat
it's when I feel heaven
Your skin on my skin
Your lips on my lips
Our love entwined like this
no other can give
what your love gives
My hands on your hands
the perfect touch
warm
subtle
yet passionate
complimenting each other
in this unreal world
where love dies easily
welcome home love

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-22 03:07 PM




YAY!!! Oooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me daydream of my dream girl and holding her close to my heart in tears of joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love forever welcome you with true happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-02-22 03:12 PM


Walker,  such enthusiastic love you have
written here...HE has to love this...Who
would not??

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2002-02-22 03:46 PM


walker,

this was a beautifully expressive
piece of poetry. i really felt the
intensity of love you obviously feel
for this person. in a way though it
was also achingly sad....beautiful
poem, very powerful write. take care.

amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

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4 posted 2002-02-22 04:28 PM


walker, another beautiful piece from you!
I sure hope your husband appreciates your poetic talent.  

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-22-2002 04:28 PM).]

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-02-22 08:58 PM


I would say this is full of admiration and appreciation...James
texasrose
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6 posted 2002-02-26 03:02 PM


Enjoyed.
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