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jennirey
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0 posted 2002-02-21 10:28 PM



Did you know you could feel a wish?
You can feel it fleeting past you,
Hurrying on its way.
Late to some overlooked date,
To brighten up someone’s day.
Did you know I tried to catch one?
I tripped and I fell,
But you were there to catch me.
Then you cast your loving spell.
Then our wishes darted like birds towards the sun
And together we simply became one.
In our hearts.
In our souls.
In our minds.
Love is ours to seize.

Did you know you can taste a dream?
You can taste the bitter remains when one fades.
But you extended your hand and restored mine.
You replaced mine with the sweet taste of hope.
My thirst was quenched by your offerings of love.
In our hearts.
In our souls.
In our minds.
Love is ours to breath.

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take,
But by the moments that take our breath away.

02/2002


© Copyright 2002 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-21 10:33 PM


WOW!!! If I didn't before I sure can now....This is beautiful and brings wishes and dreams to life...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-02-21 10:33 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) That last part is my favorite, may your life forever be filled with endless memories of breathless rapture, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

butterflykiss989
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3 posted 2002-02-21 10:58 PM


Wow... One day I hope someone out there restores my hope in dreams... You are lucky it seems someone has done that for you
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4 posted 2002-02-24 06:39 PM



For a moment, I wished this to go on, and on...and then I realized, to hold it, I had to let it go...

I enjoyed this Very Much!

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-02-25 01:40 AM


jennirey - I like your writings. This is another excellent one. What beautiful words.

BC

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