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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada

0 posted 2002-02-21 10:27 PM


Embrace The Flame

Firelight’s reflected in his eyes
flashing intense desire
With a look that doesn’t disguise
need that sets us afire

In darkness our skin starts to glow,
a passion driven flush
On my neck, a kiss, you bestow
bringing forth the first blush

The heat that burns from your caress
sends tingles up my spine
I Taste hunger that you express
from lips that capture mine

Moaning as my knees become weak,
I melt from deep within
Gasping from feelings so unique
makes my head start to spin

A velvet darkness fills the night
as we embrace the flame
It’s time to let passion ignite
the love that we proclaim

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2002 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625
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1 posted 2002-02-21 10:29 PM


Very lovely. Breathtaking!

((Karen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-02-21 10:30 PM


...Beautiful as always Karen!...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-02-21 10:36 PM


Karen - oh my, this has a lot of warmth, yes it does, warmth my dear. Lovely romance you write...

BC

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-02-21 10:42 PM


The heat that burns from your caress
sends tingles up my spine
I Taste hunger that you express
from lips that capture mine

Inspired romance, as always...beautiful.

jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx
5 posted 2002-02-21 10:44 PM


This was very sensual, and very lovley..

Thank you for sharing.


Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
6 posted 2002-02-21 11:38 PM


Startime...So very passionate and alluring are your words. I am mesmorized by your vision of passion in the night.

***Ivy Rose

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-22 10:29 AM


Karen I love this.

"In darkness our skin starts to glow,
a passion driven flush
On my neck, a kiss, you bestow
bringing forth the first blush"

Beautiful expression here. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus
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Posts 14135
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8 posted 2002-02-22 02:13 PM


Karen,  but yet another scorching and passion
filled poem....You do this so exceptionally
well....Let me go get the fire extinguisher,
my comp is on fire....

rosepetals25
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9 posted 2002-02-22 02:26 PM


Karen,

   You do these so well. So full of passion and longing As always, I like.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2002-02-22 04:36 PM


Yes, this is exactly how it was last night.. in my dream. But wow, it was a good dream
Sandra

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
11 posted 2002-02-22 05:28 PM


Mmmmm...I like this one.

Nan

Victoria
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12 posted 2002-02-22 05:39 PM


sounds like a cozy idea ha.. now to find the flame ha..hugs

               ~Vic

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