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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-21 05:54 PM



For Me


I don’t
hate you
I just
don’t want
to love
you anymore
there is
no cause
behind it
and a
world for me
to explore
I no longer
blame you
for not
loving me
so I
move on
lots more
for me
to be

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-21 05:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, I'm sorry to hear this but I am also so proud that you are following your heart and I know as long as you try to find what makes you happy, you will go far and you will find true joy forever! (sigh) Keep the faith, dearest friend, we all love you so much!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625
FL, USA
2 posted 2002-02-21 09:39 PM


Very well said!

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
3 posted 2002-02-21 09:44 PM


Can only but agree
One has to Love thee
Sad it is I must say
But life itself has more than one array
THX

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2002-02-21 11:22 PM


h
"and a world for me to explore" is very optimistic, in the middle of all of this.  It carries the poem.

but aren't your poems getting skinnier?

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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
5 posted 2002-02-21 11:46 PM


Well said...
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
6 posted 2002-02-22 01:49 AM


very well said...... don't we wish it was so easy  : )
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