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angel girl
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within a whisper...

0 posted 2002-02-21 03:36 PM


HAZE

Dark haze descending, swallowing me whole,
Blinding me in its density, shrouding my soul

It comes without warning to take me away
Into its darkness, it begs me to stay.

This calm and heavy, impenetrable haze
Impairs my vision, blurring my gaze.

In this surreal world of opaque dreams
Nothing is really all that it seems.

I fear its presence, its staid and profound weight.
It tears at my soul and I wonder if this is my fate.

Am I doomed to live in this fog forever?
Is it a part of me, will we always be together?

As I begin to think it will never leave
It begins to fade and I start to believe.

Maybe I can free myself from this haze at last
At least for a while, until it returns again from the past.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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1 posted 2002-02-21 04:27 PM


angel girl

why believe your haze
could it be a little phase
would you like sushine?

I'll gladly share some
If you will only look up
Into some sunshine.

((angel girl))
-newell




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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-21-2002 04:28 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-02-21 04:44 PM


Do I percieve some heavy doubts here?
well written

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-02-21 05:40 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) Always believe in your heart and let your heart smile and the mist of the past will forever be replaced by the sunshine of hope, we all love you so much and all our thoughts are with you! God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!



Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-02-23 04:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
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