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walker
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0 posted 2002-02-21 02:07 PM



My heart beats faster
in anticipation
as I read your words
conceived by love
Every sentence
proclaims desire
sinking me deeper
into your mind
Carelessly I let myself go
I succumb to this new trap
of love
Your words touch my soul
And as I whispher,
*I love your poem, write me again*
a tear falls down my cheek
guided
by the whirlwind of emotions
caused by your art of love

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-21 02:21 PM


Damn, I wish I'd written this!
Sven
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2 posted 2002-02-21 02:37 PM


walker. . . the passion in this is amazing. . .

well done. . .

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Dulcinea
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3 posted 2002-02-21 02:47 PM


Some very beautiful, romantic words whispered here, very nice!
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-21 03:31 PM


I know this is not written to me, but expect a post ... just for you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

butterflykiss989
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5 posted 2002-02-21 03:33 PM


Wow.. that was amazing... whoever it was written for is a very lucky individual (that is if there is a certain person)
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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-02-21 03:49 PM


walker - enjoyed this!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-02-21 04:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love your words so much and your poetry is always art to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sunshine to all our days! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-02-21 04:43 PM


...Amazing!!...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Fee
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2002-02-21 04:45 PM


Perfect, simply perfect.
Tugged at my heart strings, Well Done.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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10 posted 2002-02-21 05:10 PM


Walker, I am so in love with this poem!
You truly are the queen of romance
email me so we can finsih our duet

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