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Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-21 01:21 PM


eternity seen
by looking into your eyes
yes I am staring
~*~
only you and me
lovingly bound together
for eternity

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
1 posted 2002-02-21 01:25 PM


I love this double haiku, Interloper...
For some reason, I can never do these.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida
2 posted 2002-02-21 02:09 PM


Isn't love grand, I love these.
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-02-21 02:11 PM


ah the sweet words penned of love..you do well my friend...you do well indeed.
Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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FL, USA
4 posted 2002-02-21 02:24 PM


Your eternity
is awesome; this I can see
May God bless you both.

((Interloper))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Dulcinea
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IN
5 posted 2002-02-21 02:35 PM


Love is grand when the future can be seen in that mirror of the heart...beautifully done Interloper!


Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-02-21 05:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhh...you always write the most loveliest senryus, may you forever find eternal love reflect the mirrors of her eyes foreve and ever! (smiles) These are outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
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7 posted 2002-02-21 06:44 PM


Very loving, very nice Interloper, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
8 posted 2002-02-21 06:55 PM


eternity felt
with your arms embracing me
yes I feel the heat

~*~

as one in this world
with love shining in our eyes
for eternity

MMMM you sure set me off with your wonderful poems...Magnificent...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
9 posted 2002-02-21 08:20 PM


Such a nice piece
an very intense I might add
One can feel the eys not leaving
Well done

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-02-21 08:27 PM



Our souls, man and wife
through struggles, joy, growth and change
are mated for life.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
11 posted 2002-02-21 08:50 PM


There is a fair one
swooning at your loving words
She has all the luck

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