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Darkest Night Shall Fade To Light
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Darkest Night Shall Fade To Light |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Tonight a chill forms in the air though moonlight glows unceasingly for she was left without a care simply abandoned recklessly. She walks through graveyards dark and deep in search of spirits who may guide She longs for something real to keep into another realm abide. The shadows lurk beneath a tree which weeps in sorrow and despair She dreams of immortality The Count awaits within his lair. He steps out in a swirl of mist she hesitates but brief moments for if he does bestow his kiss she fears the doom it may portent. She gazes longingly at him with fantasies of not alone but placing herself at his whim threatens to turn her heart to stone. With subtle glance she says goodbye she knows she has much more to give this night she chooses not to die the moonlight fades, and she will live. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely told.... the taste of it suits me... I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I LOVE a happy ending  kiss not the dark count kiss instead my offered lips offering true love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahh. . . a tale well woven. . . I'd like to see and hear more about this character Sandra. . . think that you can do it??  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes she will survive ...enjoyed sweet one hugs~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - you write lovely, sad heart seeking, but lovely... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
He steps out in a swirl of mist she hesitates but brief moments for if he does bestow his kiss she fears the doom it may portent. Gee, Sandra, I'm sure glad you're still alive! Here would be my ending, Sandra: And so He smiles and says hello I know you're scared so let's go slow You just tell me each step to take I offer Love, from heaven's cake. True love is pure; you're always free Never with fear, no misery So as you put your trust in Him He'll tell your heart and soul, when To accept Love. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Very nice write, enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Haunting and wonderful!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Beautifully done and a great story. The title is so cool also. I really love this one! I'm glad I stopped to read this! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
she is lovely in her dream eyes touching there under sleep places |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Ooohhhh...this is so very true, you will survive and you will find the most beautiful love you could ever dream of and he will fill you with happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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