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Open Poetry #19

A Poet's Prayer

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-02-21 02:57 AM

A Poet's Prayer

How does my name remain unmentioned?!
I've given you my flesh and blood,
For this, you've killed the Son of God,
And I demand the same attention!

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Phaedrus
Member

since 2002-01-26

Posts 180

1 posted 2002-02-21 07:01 PM

Short but with a powerful punch, I’d have liked to have seen this expanded, though I can see the difficulty of sustaining such power over several verses.

Very well written.

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