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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-02-21 02:11 AM


Tempered
molded
by the winds
carved
as
patience
perseveres
the dust
of which
is washed away
as the heavens
unleash tears
as fireball
bakes earth
to clay
time
inclined
to find a way
the stone
becomes
a badge
of years.


Sunstone
be a cabachon.
Sun-stone-sing--
a poet's song.

[This message has been edited by serenity (02-21-2002 02:37 AM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-21 02:14 AM


Lovely write...take a bow!


crazy4u
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2 posted 2002-02-21 02:14 AM


Loved the way this just flows.
Wonderful write.
xoxo

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-02-21 06:56 AM



Keeping this one...

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2002-02-21 08:45 AM


all sorts of badges and diplomas aren't there? Nicely mystical..... good to read again the words of those I admire...


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5 posted 2002-02-21 08:58 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint visions so wonderfully, may the poets words forever be etched upon the sands of time! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-02-21 09:57 AM


cabochon singing
my sunstone worn over time
lasting medallion

Martie
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7 posted 2002-02-21 10:34 AM


serenity--

There is magic in seeing this way.  

"Sunstone
be a cabachon.
Sun-stone-sing--
a poet's song."

Indeed!

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-02-21 11:02 AM


Tempered
molded
by the winds
carved
as
patience
perseveres
the dust
of which
is washed away
===========================
Sunstone
be a cabachon.
Sun-stone-sing--
a poet's song.
============================


only you would be writing of the sun at 2 am
and you are a poets song
and you do know how cool this is right? *wink*

vlraynes
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9 posted 2002-02-22 01:03 AM



serenity-
Another excellent write from your pen.
I love this...and it's so uniquely YOU.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-02-22 10:36 AM


Oh my, I do love this serenity. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

marya2
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11 posted 2002-02-23 11:00 AM


kind of sounds like a dark art poem with lots of undertones of witchcraft?  Interesting.

marya

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-02-23 12:44 PM


I wanted to pop in to express my appreciation (I KNOW, I'm rather hit and miss about that--my apologies as well)

And I'm still thumbing through a catalog here, I guess this is the fourth one so far? Dunno...but it's a neat idea for inspiration!

Thanks all! Love you bunches!

mirror man
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13 posted 2002-02-24 03:43 AM


I like this.  Very good.
Contabo
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14 posted 2002-02-24 07:25 AM


You are more than you know of your being.

Contabo

peaches73533
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15 posted 2002-02-24 09:32 AM


I love the flow of this write.
peaches

Kit McCallum
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16 posted 2002-02-24 10:01 AM


"the stone
becomes
a badge
of years."

A wonderfully mystical undercurrent throughout Karen, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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