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HEG
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0 posted 2002-02-21 01:55 AM


Without her speaking a word,
her making not a single sound,
the way a woman truly feels,
her emotion...is usually found.

Whether experiencing joy or sadness,
either happiness satisfying and great,
or grief and despair so deep, any such
pleasure or hurt does this telltale sign create.

The presence of emotion from love to sorrow
is announced in a manner that’s clear.
The circumstance and this reveal her feelings.
This being...her involuntary shedding of a tear!


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crazy4u
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1 posted 2002-02-21 01:58 AM


Yes we're moved to tears a lot.. Guilty!
But I think so are men<~~~ you're poem applies to both.
loved it
xoxo

amusemi
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2 posted 2002-02-21 02:03 AM


Beautiful observation, and I don't know that I have seen your work before.  If I didn't already...Welcome!!  I'll look for more in the future!!  
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3 posted 2002-02-21 11:13 PM


I rarely cry tears of joy, seems so odd to cry when happy....I do cry when I am sad though....I liked this very much
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-02-21 11:19 PM


Like the way you wrote this...James
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5 posted 2002-02-21 11:25 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may she forever cry tears of hope and love and may the rain wash her tears of sorrow away! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

butterflykiss989
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since 2002-02-19
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6 posted 2002-02-22 12:17 PM


How truly you managed to capture what a few of us (me included) do not like to admit... I enjoyed this greatly...
HEG
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7 posted 2002-02-22 08:22 PM


Dear Crazy4u, amusemi, SEA, James, Noah, and butterflykiss989 ~~~

   Thanks to each and every one of you for your very kind replies to my poem. I do appreciate your taking time to respond, and I value each opinion offered. :-)

Thanks!
Harry

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