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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-21 12:40 PM

Then

one day
again we shall
meet in passing
and I wonder
will you
acknowledge me
then

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2002-02-21 02:13 AM

I know someone I would ask that question of...but I already know the answer.

Nice write!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-21 11:32 AM

Thought provoking write.
I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-02-21 11:34 AM

Ah..how would one not acknowledge?

nicely asked....

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2002-02-21 01:52 PM

Oh, cool write...loved this!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

5 posted 2002-02-21 04:43 PM

1slick_lady. And if he (I assuming he) doesn't, he certainly isn't worthy of you now is he now? After all, YOU ARE SPECIAL!
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-02-21 04:45 PM

And if he did, would he be worthy of your reply? Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-21 05:09 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, I am sure your love will forever acknowledge you and forever fill you with the happiness you deserve so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2002-02-21 05:54 PM

Helen....as the others have said, this is very nicely done. Brief, poignant, refreshingly simple. Bob

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