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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-21 12:07 PM


Heated love - A Sonnet for Marsha

"How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights! "
NIV Song of Solomon 7:6

She came to me upon the wings of time
An angel that God sent to make me warm
Perfect in her way melting me to rhyme
She called on me, come darling take my arm.

Her outstretched hand I touched in fiery mist
I took her spirit quickly in my soul
And then we flew to heaven as we kissed
My broken parts were mended and made whole.

At once we knew our destiny was set
In all of time as we found purest love
No jealousy, no guilt nor shame, and yet
Our love was engineered by God above.

For though we love in hottest human ways
Our love is pure as only God could make
Hot lightning fires across our poles, for days
We live our lives for God's eternal sake.

Darling girl and darling boy in, love free
In heated love in God's eternity.

Heated love.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
February 20, 2002


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[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-21-2002 12:08 AM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-21 02:37 AM


Stunning...She must love this!!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-02-21 02:40 AM


Very..very nice...James
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3 posted 2002-02-21 10:56 AM


Newell darling boy this is truly fabulous, I know I always say this is soooooooooooo good but sometimes even the best superlatives in the dictionary don’t suffice. This is one of those times You’ve painted a wonderful picture here, each line a brushstroke bringing the painting to vibrant life as only YOU can do so. As I said outstandingly good. The flow of this is superb and this is a gift of such awesome magnitude, as a poem this is the ultimate romantic song. You know I utterly utterly love this don’t you

~pure~       ~love~
that  came    from  above
a touch that just flew into me
granting me love’s sanctity
I found peace within you
there is hope living too
you gave love liberty
So now I’m free
Love pure
love



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-21 11:02 AM


Well done ... both of you

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-02-21 11:14 AM


~pure~ ~love~
that came from above
a touch that just flew into me
granting me love’s sanctity
I found peace within you
there is hope living too
you gave love liberty
So now I’m free
Love pure
love
'

In
God
So free
Love was
Given to me
And now you are
Loving Him and me
We've both found
His love so free
so now my
darling
I give
  It  
'

Back to thee
Free!

I love you, Marsha xo
((Marsha))
-newell



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[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-21-2002 11:16 AM).]

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-21 11:18 AM


Thank you, amuseme for you kind thoughts.
((amuseme))

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-02-21 11:19 AM


Thank you James for your very kind words.
((James))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-02-21 11:22 AM


Thank you, Interloper.
((Interloper))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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