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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-02-20 10:07 PM


Takes two to tango
not when the shoe is on the other foot
takes two to wrangle
not when reading an interesting book.

Take two for the price of one
fine couples do when their battles are won
takes two to tango
takes two to wrangle.

takes two halfs to make a whole
a cut affair puts that in a hole
and when the shoe is on the other foot
will you just sit there and read that book?





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Nan
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1 posted 2002-02-21 09:18 AM


It always takes two... We did a challenge with that phrase - Yours fits quite nicely with the rest...
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2 posted 2002-02-21 07:54 PM


So very nicely said, Martin...

The poem dances beautifully


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3 posted 2002-02-21 07:58 PM




BRAVO!!! This is sooooooo wonderfully expressed, dearest friend, it takes two to tango, but when two halves are apart, there can't be too much to expect there! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so muchk, sweet friend, your talent is priceless! You have sucha  beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-02-21 08:08 PM


Didn't know about the challenge Nan, glad you liked this

Madame Chip and Noah

thanks for clicking in


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