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Martie
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0 posted 2002-02-20 09:30 PM


Some times I write
knowing

knowing you read

read to see my okay or not

where has my winter taken me
and how is my despair
my joy

You show me you care
with your white space

In that place I see you so clear
nodding your head and smiling

I blow you a kiss

[This message has been edited by Martie (02-20-2002 09:41 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-20 09:32 PM



and I throw you a hug....

Some times you write?  Oh dear, indeed you do....

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2 posted 2002-02-20 09:39 PM


Excellent,very good read!
O_Dara

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3 posted 2002-02-20 09:58 PM


You show me you care
with your white space

In that place I see you so clear
nodding your head and smiling

I blow you a kiss
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
No words just now Martie...just a big hug.
Nancy.

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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4 posted 2002-02-20 10:04 PM


Yes, she sure has a way of lighting up a room even when she is not in it, through that white space.  Martie what a loving poem.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
  ~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~



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5 posted 2002-02-20 11:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, your beautiful words are always a delight to read, sweet friend, here's some extra big hugs for you! (EXTRA BIG HUGS) YAY!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-20 11:30 PM


Sis~
Indeed, poetess~
Yes ... you do~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-02-20 11:35 PM


nodding and smiling here, Martie
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8 posted 2002-02-20 11:39 PM


A kiss on the cheek, my precious friend. *hugs*

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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9 posted 2002-02-21 02:56 AM


This deserves a bunch of kisses...James
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10 posted 2002-02-21 08:49 AM


Sometimes I read
knowing the words said
say only the part
hiding the depths
from eys not meant
to breathe the liquid soul


as usual Martie.... I enjoyed.


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11 posted 2002-02-21 09:42 AM


And I'm grateful for each time you do. *S* Smiles here. *S*
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12 posted 2002-02-21 09:44 AM


Yes, you DO write ... magnificently

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2002-02-22 12:53 PM



Martie-
Yes, you do...and it's always beautiful.
Big hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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14 posted 2002-02-22 12:57 PM


...and glad we are that you do!!


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15 posted 2002-02-22 10:31 AM


And dear Martie here are some ((((hugs)))) just for you. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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17 posted 2002-08-22 09:52 PM


I am glad I found this....it is a very
special piece...one that I relate to well.
Reading and wondering if the words of
another are showing a mood,  is it real?
Hoping that all is OK...that they are not
hurt....So many that we have a bond of heart
with...yet never having seen the other or
touched their hands....

Though...most certainly they have touched us
in many many ways.....

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