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Larry C
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What Mind?
By Larry Chadwick



I’ve lost my mind,
It can’t be found.
Looked here and there,
And even all around.

Perhaps my mother,
Was really being kind,
When she asked me,
“Are you out of your mind?”

February 20, 2002



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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-02-20 08:55 PM


Larry - I used to get this all the time, wugga, wugga, lllhhewnouwtjnsnxvoistjmdsg;lm

BC

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2 posted 2002-02-20 08:56 PM


Larry~

LOL mine said the same thing...some days I feel if it werent attached to my shoulders there'd be noooo hope...ya know maybe out there roaming somewhere....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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3 posted 2002-02-20 09:11 PM



Deep chuckles....

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4 posted 2002-02-20 09:38 PM


Larry darling boy this is utterly utterly fabulous writing. Well, let me see have you lost your mind?

I looked there and I’ve looked here
Maybe it’s hiding in Keth’s beer
I can understand it taking cover
Trying to get away from your mother
But really Larry is it necessary
To call out a full scale search party
It won’t be found you do know that?
I thought I saw it with Tom’s cat
The last thing I think it said
Was so long Larry I’m off too bed

Sorry I couldn’t resist love, it is a wonderful poem well done

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-02-20 09:39 PM


Bill,
I'd like to help you but I'm still looking for my own! LOL

Lauren,
That was the other line my mom used to give me. "You'd lose your head if it weren't attached!" lol

Karilea,
LOL Thanks.

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6 posted 2002-02-20 09:42 PM


LOL! It wasn't just my mom saying that to me!LOL!
O_Dara

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-02-20 09:48 PM


o Dara,
Hardly! LOL Thanks. And welcome again. Glad you're here!

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8 posted 2002-02-20 09:51 PM


Thanks
This is great
smiling

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