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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-20 04:49 PM



Tied Up

what keeps
me alone
when I could
so easily
be loving you
am I too afraid
I may get
something
I wanted
am I afraid
awaiting punishment
from happiness
can I free
myself from
my mistakes
can I free myself
from myself
can I cut
the cord from
the tie that
binds me
and for once
tie it
to another
emotion


"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Wanda
Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461

1 posted 2002-02-20 05:01 PM


So beautifully written.  Wanda
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-02-20 05:34 PM


Yes...tied by our own doing.

Nicely done... ( slipping her a sharp knife while no one looks)


Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
3 posted 2002-02-20 09:20 PM


beautiful...  Dare to be free.... just for today
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