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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-20 02:15 PM


my love is selfish
walk out the door and I miss you
how I love you so
sharing you is difficult
hurry back to waiting arms

Inspired by:Short “I Miss You” Rhyme


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-20 02:57 PM


Interloper,
Enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-02-20 03:11 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet freind, I too know how you feel, for every hour I miss my Joanna I too can feel this way! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever shine in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-02-20 03:25 PM


Nice, I relate as always.
Sandra

doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-02-20 04:37 PM


well i didn't write the one that inspired  you but.... i'm BACK!!!! hehe *wink
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5 posted 2002-02-20 04:44 PM


Interloper~

The ache of the miss....nicely done my friend...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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6 posted 2002-02-20 04:44 PM


I see you still are the romantic...

nice to read again your words....

walker
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7 posted 2002-02-20 06:02 PM


I loved it.
Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-02-20 06:12 PM


Interloper...Another fantastic write. The beauty of your work is that you say so much in the three or four lines of your verse. This was excellent!!!!! ***Ivy Rose
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
9 posted 2002-02-20 06:39 PM


Not selfish at all...


strbbux
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10 posted 2002-02-20 06:44 PM


Interloper, why do I understand this so much. this is wonderful and loving, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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11 posted 2002-02-20 06:47 PM


Nice...and do I ever know this feeling..
Nightshade
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just out of reach
12 posted 2002-02-20 07:38 PM


Enjoyed as always. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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13 posted 2002-02-20 07:52 PM


Wonderful Interloper!

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2002-02-20 09:30 PM



Nah...that's just common sense!

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2002-02-20 11:29 PM


Seems like selfish and the act of appreciating and missing what you have are closely interelated here...James
CocoBaci
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16 posted 2002-02-24 03:15 AM


precious....
Smiles2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

peaches73533
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17 posted 2002-02-24 08:50 AM


So much said with such few words.
Peaches

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18 posted 2002-02-25 06:47 PM


Lovely

Admiring you at Passions.

Krissy
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19 posted 2002-02-25 06:53 PM


Interloper this I like a lot, The ache that you feel when you’re not with the one who holds your heart, you write this very well.

Excellent writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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