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Tim
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0 posted 2002-02-20 01:46 PM


I've lost myself, where can I be,
Searched high and low, I can't find me,
I was right here, or so I thought,
But when I looked, it seems I'm not.

If I'm not here, perhaps I'm there,
I'll take a look, but where is there?
Can I be here, if I'm not there,
Or could I be not anywhere?

If you see me, please let me know,
Lock all the doors, don't let me go,
I'll be right there, for me to find,
If you would please, be o' so kind.

You say you found me, that I'm right here?
I'll be right there, if there is near,
I am so glad, me I did find,
I really thought, I'd lost my mind.

[This message has been edited by Tim (02-20-2002 10:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-20 01:49 PM


Tim - wow !! I liked this seek and find rhyme. I've lost myself before and was terribly lonesome without me. Chris

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2 posted 2002-02-20 01:55 PM




YAY!!! (big hugggssssss) Oh Tim, I know just how you feel, for when I was a little boy I thought I'd never find myself when I doubted my existance through all my abuse, but now just sharing love has helped me find myself and it is such a great feeling to love yourself through those trials! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwys shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-20 02:02 PM


wow loved it
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4 posted 2002-02-20 06:31 PM


Hey this is great Tim, kind of like hide n seek. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-02-20 08:20 PM


Tim - great write. Loved this tune...

BC

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6 posted 2002-02-20 09:54 PM



You and Larry C are two of a mind...

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