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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-02-20 11:13 AM



“TEACHING YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Summer days spent searching,
for the likes of one as you…
Didn’t know who I would find,
it’s what I know, can’t argue…

Softness of your charm,
fragile of stature, delicate…
Moist red lips just waiting,
reminds me, of a rose bouquet…

Softer than a petals blossom,
running my fingers, in your hair…
A’hhhh, perfect these delights,
BC will meet you, anywhere…

I’ll take you slowly to the moon,
place you into passions trance…
You’ll know how it feels tonight,
teaching you, about my romance…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-20 11:47 AM


Bill~

I’ll take you slowly to the moon,
place you into passions trance"

You have the softest way of revealing such a romantic heart....lovely...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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2 posted 2002-02-20 12:02 PM


Absolutely beautiful words.

"I’ll take you slowly to the moon,
place you into passions trance…
You’ll know how it feels tonight,
teaching you, about my romance…"

Just love this entire poem Bill, you do these well. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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3 posted 2002-02-20 01:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Ooooohh....you are truly a King of Romance, sweet friend, she is a very lucky woman and will always be so happy to have a loving and wonderful man like you by her side! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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just out of reach
4 posted 2002-02-20 01:41 PM


Bill, how lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-02-20 02:05 PM


always enjoys reading your poetry
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6 posted 2002-02-20 03:58 PM


I have no doubt of that my friend. . . just look at the line behind me. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2002-02-20 05:05 PM


Bill,

   This is just lovely Your words are always so sweet. I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2002-02-20 09:34 PM


Oh yes..slowly to the moon...and than back again ...mmmmm
i like this one alot bill..

                ~Vic

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9 posted 2002-02-20 09:48 PM


This is stunning...  : )

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10 posted 2002-02-20 10:34 PM


I’ll take you slowly to the moon,
place you into passions trance…
You’ll know how it feels tonight,
teaching you, about my romance…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love this Bill....just love it!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Ivy Rose
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11 posted 2002-02-20 10:35 PM


WOW!!! This poem sizzles with the sweet honey of seduction. Not a wildfire; but the embers are there~~~  ***Ivy Rose
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