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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2002-02-20 10:57 AM

Enticed
~~~
Addicted hearts
endure the sting of constant spurn
A narcotic pang
of passion's flame dependent grip
Fatal attractions
of blackest night
~
Hear them
mock the moth
while they chase the light
~~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-02-20 11:14 AM

Hey Rex!!  Good to see you in here!
This is great!  I especially like....
"Hear them
mock the moth
while they chase the light"

Nice job here.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-02-20 12:10 PM

Wow this poem is indeed enticing.

"A narcotic pang
of passion's flame dependent grip
Fatal attractions
of blackest night'

Great write, I enjoyed it . floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-20 02:01 PM

BRAVO!!! YAY!!! Ooohhhh...the end is my favorite part, this is a gorgeous kepper! I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-02-24 09:49 AM

And don't you know that we remain thus...

addicted, that is...

one thing is certain...I do not gain any weight when my fingers are busy at the keyboard....

one of my better addictions, I do so believe...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-02-24 10:02 AM

"Might as well face it, we're addicted to love"
This is good Rex,
Snda

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-02-24 10:20 AM

Rex,
We're all addicted in this way.Nice to see you again.Nice job.
Peaches

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-03-10 09:28 AM

So enjoy seeing the treasures yet again, back in the dark of my little closet...

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2002-03-10 10:50 AM

What a wonderful metaphor... I love it, Rex.. I'm smiling..

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-03-10 04:53 PM

Rex darling boy we do not see enough of you in the forum. I went looking for this I saw it earlier and then didn’t find it where I expected it to be, which was at the top of the page, front and center. Oh well I’ve now dusted it off and given it a Bumpity bump. WONDERFUL WRITING utterly utterly wonderful

:bump:

:bump:
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-03-10 05:06 PM

I agree Rex....nicely put...thanx.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2002-03-10 11:22 PM

hey Rex....good to find your name here...
this is a way cool cryptic write.
clever rhyme and turn of phrase
love that last verse.
well done poet sir

Awake again I can't pretend ... and I know I'm alone ...
And so close to the end of the feelings we've known.

~Jackson Browne~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-03-10 11:46 PM

We must all be the proverbial moth. Had your wings singed lately?

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