Her Song (Dedicated to Greeneyes)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-02-20 10:32 AM

Into a radiant butterfly she has grown
baring her heart, her soul she has shown.
Beauty and grace depicting her delicate side
in her waves of thought, we get lost in the tide~

In her ocean of dreams our mind slips away
lost in her tenderness, a wish made to stay.
Through eyes of emerald her inner light shines
her words of perfection, flavored like a fine wine~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her gift is her words with eloquent artistry strong
we love our dear Greeneyes, come listen to her song.

(thank you dear Lauren, for always just being you... )

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-20-2002 10:35 AM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-02-20 10:45 AM

Donna~

OMGOSH I just walked in and here this was, I love you for this....wow dear friend....you always know just when I need that smile and that hug..I am at such a loss for words right now...you have managed to make tears appear...but good tears....Thank you from my heart to yours

....

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-02-20 10:47 AM

I am glad that I can still know when you need that hug, and that I can be here to give it to you my friend. E-mail should be on it's way. I was just remembering and wanted to thank you for the smiles...and memories. Hugs to you, you are very special dear one....very special. (Even the monkey said so....*w*)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-20-2002 10:51 AM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-02-20 10:54 AM

A wonderful tribute to a wonderful member of Passions

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2002-02-20 12:15 PM

Yes, very beautiful!! I like it, too.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2002-02-20 12:15 PM

Yes, very beautiful!! I like it, too.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-20 01:49 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always touch my heart! This is a beautiful tribute for our sweet Lauren, we all love you both so so much, YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-02-20 08:57 PM

Thank you all. She truly is remarkable is she not? And she is the kind of friend that everyone should have, and I for one am proud to call her friend. Hugs to you all.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-02-20 10:31 PM

GentleSpirit~
Yes .... you have depicted our GreenEyes well~
Especially ...

'Beauty and grace depicting her delicate side'

That's her alright~
Lovely tribute to our friend~

LOVE YA' GreenEyes~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-02-20 10:41 PM

Now didn't this just wrap her up so right! Well done!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2002-02-20 10:44 PM

Donna,
I'm always glad to listen. Wonderful tribute. Well done.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-02-20 10:51 PM

This is so "Lauren" and while I am thanking you for thanking her, let me thank you too! You caught her heart in this one that is for sure, and I can remember a year ago when I came she was a favorite that day, and still is! Blessings, Lauren.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-02-20 10:54 PM

Donna, this is very well said. And our Greeneyes deserves it so much! Lauren is such a beautiful writer and person.
~Hugs, to you both, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2002-02-21 11:22 AM

Into a radiant butterfly she has grown
baring her heart, her soul she has shown.
Beauty and grace depicting her delicate side
in her waves of thought, we get lost in the tide
=======================================

Donna this is beautiful and you capture her grace and beauty well...thank you for sharing this poetic tribute ...
its no secret how much Laurens poetry means to me...every word lands in my heart.
Shes a butterfly alright

Your sincerety of pen and kind intend is a lovely tribute to your and hers friendship as well.
but then we have come to expect this from someone named Gentle Spirit

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-02-21 11:27 AM

Yes Donna..Lauren is very special..and so kind of you to write this lovely poem about her..hugs

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2002-02-21 11:48 AM

Donna~

Thank you again for this...and for your friendship through the years with many more to come.....

..and for all the generous replies, I am humbled....in sincerely's when I say love ya all....peace to each with a special hug....

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-21-2002 11:51 AM).]

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

16 posted 2002-02-21 10:39 PM

*bump*

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

17 posted 2002-02-21 10:52 PM

BRAVO!!!!You have captured the heart and soul of her perfectly...I love this poem...

**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

18 posted 2002-02-22 06:16 AM

Larry, thanks for the bump, and for caring so much.

Startime, thanks for the words. Her grace and friendship inspires me. Thank you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2002-02-22 08:00 AM

Thank you all.

Lauren has graced me with her friendship.  She has
taught me that it is ok to stand strong in my convictions.
She has touched my life in more ways than I can ever share.
She helped me to understand that it is ok to shed a tear....
She has brought a much needed smile to my face many times.
She has accepted me as I am, regardless of my faults.
Through her I have learned that it is ok to be me just the way I am.

Her words breathe over us like a warm soft gentle summer rain.
I don't often have near the time here anymore as I used to....life changes....
(I'm not complaining though  *s*)
I wanted to be able to give her something back....the only gift that I can give is
this gift of words.

It is with pride that I call Lauren friend.
A very special hug to you all for helping
me to hug her.  God Bless you all.
Hugs to poetry land~
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

20 posted 2002-02-22 08:49 AM

greeneyes
lady L
lauren
all women
in one
special

wear smile places
inside

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

21 posted 2002-02-22 08:55 AM

DS, thank you.........it will mean much to her. Hugs...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

22 posted 2002-02-22 08:58 AM

It's nice to see someone writing of a newfound friendship

Wonderful thoughts

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

23 posted 2002-02-22 08:54 PM

Well I am late..but I still want to say. THANK YOU BOTH!!! For being such a special part of Passion's heart and my own. You both are gentle reminders of the beauty of being female and being friends. Two very lovely essences in life. Big HUGS!!! And such a wonderful tribute!

Peace and Poetry ~Somy!! And Lauren

Sincerely,
Regina

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

24 posted 2002-02-26 03:01 PM

I only know her beautiful words.
BUMP DE BUMP!

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