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vandana
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0 posted 2002-02-20 10:32 AM



I want you
I need you
I love you
Miss you more
When you are not here
Each day passes by,
Want even you more
Want to
see you again,
Pouring rain,
I just love you
Don't you know?
It hurts me
Not to see you again
When you don't come
to me
I cry at night
I try
to feel the pain,
Tonight,
Iam alone,
I just thinking about you
See you again
It Iseven harder for mw
When I don't see you again,
Don't know why?
But It hurts me
Because there Is a deep feeling
Inside of my heart
that can't hide away,
See you again

© Copyright 2002 vandana - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-02-20 12:14 PM


A very yearning poem Vandana and a very nice one. I loved it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

amusemi
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2 posted 2002-02-20 12:17 PM


Yes, yearning is the word.  Great write there, my friend!
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-02-20 01:36 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so sad yet so beautiful, I hope you have true love close to your heart now and that you'll always see your love again through each brand new day! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-20-2002 01:36 PM).]

Sven
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4 posted 2002-02-20 04:01 PM


ah yes my friend. . . you speak the words that we long to say. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Fee
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5 posted 2002-02-20 04:49 PM


It is hard when the heart yearns for that special someone, the one that makes breathing seem easy, and when their not around the heart just aches.

Nice write.

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-04-03 02:25 PM



It is easy to know why we love someone, and wrenching when we cannot be with them...you've said that very well in this poem, Vandana...

RosePetal
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7 posted 2002-04-03 08:26 PM


oh yes, i know how this feels! enjoyed my friend
Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-04-03 08:31 PM


Oh this just aches!  Very well spoken...I know this feeling well.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

suthern
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9 posted 2002-04-04 01:03 PM


This aches with loneliness and longing... well done! *S*
Charisma
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10 posted 2002-04-04 01:25 PM


yearning for your special one....beautiful translated emotions from your heart.

(((warm hugs))
Charisma

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