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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-02-20 08:28 AM

Web of Poetry

I threw a web of poetry
Into our human sea
And hauled it out with filigree
Just full of souls bootee

It glittered as it came in near
Sang into my ear
A treasure trove of loving dear
Brought my eyes near tear.

The words had turned to colored spore
That turned in turn too more
Turning into moths of core
And that in turn to awe

It brought me to my dreamer’s goal
Before my door of soul
It brought me through the blackest hole
With the smallest of dole

So now I fence a poets pen
Of humanities now and then

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-20 08:39 AM

(big hugggsssssss) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, at first before I discovered poetry a couple years ago I always felt doleful and felt I was submerging myself into eternal grief then when my sophomore English teacher inspired me, I felt I had found peace and comfort in myself, and now I write always with a smile on my face and with tears down my cheeks as I find my imaginaion come alive! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo gorgeous, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-02-20 09:23 AM

Noah,
Thank you for the wonderful comment.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-02-20 09:34 AM

I threw a web of poetry
Into our human sea
And hauled it out with filigree
Just full of souls bootee

It glittered as it came in near
Sang into my ear
A treasure trove of loving dear
Brought my eyes near tear.

The words had turned to colored spore
That turned in turn too more
Turning into moths of core
And that in turn to awe
=====================================

yes ... this moth has been in awe ever since the first read ... realizing she had found a treasure chest of rhyme divine woven with golden strands of wisdom's wise and the harmony of poet's soul's songs.

AND .... I'm quite fond of the way your pen shakes it "bootee" ROFL

*WINKIEWINKIE* me sweetStinky *L*

( I knew your pen would talk to you)

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-02-20 09:59 AM

So now I fence a poets pen
Of humanities now and then

Seymour - thoroughly enjoyed this! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-02-20 10:19 AM

Jm,
So long my pen can stir a bree
Your butterfly will land on me.
So long as I can rhyme the air
You stay with me my lady fair.

But I am but a Randy do
Just making goo goo eyes at you
And you are much to good for me
Even my pen writes Scotish bree.

You turn my sky to brilliant hue
That is exactly what you do.
You make me want to lay me down
The offer of your princely crown.

I cannot resist your beauty
In the sense that is my duty
I'd do this and not turn a dare
If I could truly touch your hair.

And Randy my trusted dragon
Stands there with his tail a waggen.

Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-02-20 10:20 AM

Chris,
I thank you for your enjoy.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-02-20 11:15 AM

*sigh*

all those things you say I do?
you do all that for me too.
thank you Sy-babes (and Randy-do) *L*
*winkiewinkie*

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-02-20 11:16 AM

It glittered as it came in near
Sang into my ear
A treasure trove of loving dear
Brought my eyes near tear.

Never has there been such a wonderful weaving of a poetry web....extremely great stuff here Sy guy. Wonderful...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-02-20 11:18 AM

OH yeah....AND....
your pen DONT WRITE "Scottish Bree"
It ONLY writes the fine wine of pure poetry.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-20 12:09 PM

Oh seymour, how lovely your poet pen writes, love this much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-02-20 02:20 PM

I thank you Gentle Spirit.

JM,

for you,

for butterfly and a

for Tinkerbell.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

Floria,
And a

for you.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-02-21 09:04 AM

I really don't miss 'em...I just got embroiled in the webs yesterday...

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2002-02-21 09:11 AM

Seymour darling boy Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent.

A web of pure poetry indeed and I love it. It’s utterly utterly superb

How do you manage to do these so well darling boy, truly awesome writing.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2002-02-21 09:17 AM

Wonderful, Sy, just wonderful

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2002-02-21 10:57 AM

I think poetry has saved me, Sy. And you made a beauty here.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-02-21 12:13 PM

Sunshine,

Mushy,

Thank you Interloper.

Sandra,

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

17 posted 2002-02-21 02:49 PM

ah yes. . . the web that is poetry. . .

it will forever entangle. . . well done Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2002-02-21 03:56 PM

Thank you Sven.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

19 posted 2002-02-21 04:59 PM

enjoy your work sy
well done my friend

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

20 posted 2002-02-21 07:45 PM

I always know that when I see your name...I will definitely be in for a treat...and this time was no exception....
perfect writing, Sy!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

21 posted 2002-02-21 07:51 PM

Just seeing your name pop up means a 'must read' for me! You never fail to disappoint me, and this one shines!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

22 posted 2002-02-21 10:40 PM

Dark Stranger,
Thank you.

Madame C,
A

for that comment.

Nancy,
Thank you.

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