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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2002-02-20 02:20 AM


Even
within
darks in flat--
monotone,
dreams--
where I'm at.
Even sparks
of mighty notes
a children's
game
of cards on spoke...
methodical
of restlessness
where I am
I'll be again
continuity
in spin.
Even
within
darks in flat...


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amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-20 02:51 AM


Cool write.  I like the cards in spokes part...that is fun!!
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-02-20 03:41 PM


Continue...for the spin you are in... is but a part of the spiral...


nice to read your wards again..


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