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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2002-02-20 12:26 PM


I dont need to write
   of tender looks and soft touches.
I dont need to write
   of smiles that light up my life.
I dont need to write
   of love made in the dawning
I dont need to write
   Im living the poem.

I dont need to write
   of feathered kisses 'cross my lips.
I dont need to write
   of teasing laughter in the dark.
I dont need to write
   of dreams of ever after.
I dont need to write
   Im living the poem.

Love you

© Copyright 2002 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-02-20 01:15 AM


intersting suggestion here, poetry runs in our blood..nice write


Duncan
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2 posted 2002-02-20 01:16 AM


I can relate so much to this, though still working on the real time thing.  Great idea, this.  Living the poem...exactly!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-02-20 03:11 AM


Sounds like life is worth living Paula...James
EagleOne
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4 posted 2002-02-20 04:20 AM


Way to go Paula, keep on living!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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5 posted 2002-02-20 08:21 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sweet, dearest friend, love is always a poem waiting to be acted out upon the stage of life with whimsical grace and a smile! (kiss on cheek) May true love forveer have your heart sing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-20 09:03 AM


Paula darling girl I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful, as YOU very well know.

I can see you are living the poem indeed darling and it suits you sooooooo well
This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful.

Absolutely first class writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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