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Open Poetry #19
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poeticdreamer
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since 2002-01-17
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0 posted 2002-02-19 11:22 PM

Black wasp anger mounting:

Feeling the sting before it strikes,

On the backside of a life fading,

Red glaring eyes appear in moonlit blackness,

Wings of a fallen angel glisten ebony evil,

Fiery creature of abandoned rejection seething,

Gripping throat with merciless burning hatred,

How dare you love with unquestioning faith,

On your knees worthless delicate mortal,

Dropping there your white light prayer destroys him.

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Archiveghost
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1 posted 2002-02-20 07:30 PM

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2002-02-20 07:51 PM

poeticdreamer - wow, much said in this poem.

BC
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3 posted 2002-03-14 01:25 AM

I really like the tone you've set.  Coupled with some very vivid images, you've made for a keeper.
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