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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-19 11:13 PM

Ramble Series.....

~~~~
I'll bring to breezes
From the sea,
In golden strands
So each day you'll
Remember
My smile

Standing there
Along the shore
So many times
Looking back
I must
Be selfish
Wanting all your space
Me only me
Invading your eyes
To stretch my self
Among your smile

I thought it was
Enough to just
Love the rain
And sunsets,
A room of clouds
And windows
To watch
Ships
Touching the night
In silence

You weave the shelter
Of your heart
In colorful threads,
Draped across
My shoulders with your
Finest silk
Laced in lilies
And rose petals
Of velvet veins

Far from the moon
Before midnight
The touch of your
Skin finds me
Wandering in an
Endless trace
Along your body
You fill my eyes
With your world
And undress
Me with your
Grace of orchids
Breathe and satin
Sheets

Promise me
One day
Just the two of us
Will leave footprints
Along the island
With soft smiles
And calm seas
Maybe many years
From now
To tell ourselves
The bridges are still strong

Laying in darkness,
Still warm
With your touch
No longer afraid
Of your leaving

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-20-2002 06:56 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-02-19 11:20 PM

Lauren,
The bridges are strong I'm sure and the future good as well!

Great write.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-20-2002 09:08 PM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2002-02-19 11:55 PM

I feel the dusk, that moment of each day when it must rest and before dreams are allowed to play. The bridge between light and dark, perhaps even questions and answers. At the base of all of this lays the sea, perhaps a harbor, a place of heart.
A lovely view for aching eyes these windows of your world. An inspiring ramble, thank you for the read.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-02-20 12:29 PM

GreenEyes~

Another beautiful quilling~

'You weave the shelter
Of your heart
In colorful threads,
Draped across
My shoulders with your
Finest silk
Laced in lilies
And rose petals
Of velvet veins'

WOW ! How truly beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-02-20 06:18 AM

Your rambles are some of your most beautiful work Lauren. This is exquisite hon.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-20 08:18 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your gorgeous rambles of poetic perfection, the words and images always flow from your heart like silk upon these pages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-02-20 04:04 PM

I've always said that you're at your best when you just let the words come. . .

and here it is. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-02-20 04:50 PM

Larry~

you have always been so supportive, thank you my friend...

~~

Craig~

Indeed the dreams need to rest before playing, and I have found in my journey along the way they are getting the much needed sleep....thank you dear friend...

HUGS

~~

Marge~

WOW thank you for stopping, so glad you enjoyed this...appreciate you...

~~

Donna~

I thank you, always for you support and for your friendship....they mean so much to me....

HUGS

~~

Noah~

I can just see your vibrant face...lovely response always thanks....

~~

Sven~

and they come in a form of ramble...LOL thanks Sven....HUGS
Love to all...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-20-2002 04:51 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-02-20 08:52 PM

Greeneyes - very touching write. You my friend are one excellent poet...

BC

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-02-20 09:02 PM

lovely romantic words Lauren and a lovely new pic too...hugss

~Vic

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-02-20 09:16 PM

Lauren,

Your imagery is stunning and you story wonderfully romantic. Much enjoyed, my friend.

*hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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