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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-02-19 10:14 PM


I delve into the depths of my mind
and try so hard to recollect
the last time that you and I
were truly happy together

Wasn't it the night when
we were bathed in the moon's
milky glow as we counted the stars
in the constellations
way up high
When we claimed the brightest
star as our very own
Such a memorable night
that you seem to have forgotten

I now see a stranger
when looking into your eyes
But my mind desperately tries
to mould the image of
this stranger's face back into
the face that was once filled
with so much love and passion for me
as we once walked hand in hand
bathed in the moon's milky glow

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-02-19 10:19 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now true love shines in your heart and love is never again a stranger to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-19 11:42 PM


lovely words Sue..and beautiful images..hugs

                 ~Vic

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