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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-02-19 09:50 PM


I've recently become enamored of the legends and magic of Ireland. I'd like to present a challenge, Give me your best Irish Poem!

A verdant mist hangs in the air
o'er carpets soft of emerald fields
the scent of ocean touches all
and magic is there if you yield.

Here fairies dwell with leprechauns
and second sight is common lore
enchantment lives under each stone
if you shall peer in through the door

The sunlight sparkles on the sea
a turquoise glow surrounds your soul
Let now your heart open in full
to loves' design which makes all whole.

The moon illuminates a spell
A sorcerer offers for you
such magic here in Ireland
awaiting all who come unto.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-19 09:52 PM


Beautiful poem and wonderful challenge Catalinamoon!!!
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YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love Irish tales so so much, much of my family's blood is Irish and the rest is Cherokee Indian and I have always loved fables and folklore of these cultures! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, Erin Go Braugh! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



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Love,
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3 posted 2002-02-19 09:59 PM



LOL...Cat, can I use my "old" ones?  I'm about brain dead now...

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4 posted 2002-02-19 10:13 PM


This is most wonderful Catalina, dont know if i would have time, but I would love to if I can find the time to do one. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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5 posted 2002-02-19 10:15 PM


Great idea Sandra, and if I can muster one up I will be in - yours was fantastic!

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6 posted 2002-02-19 10:15 PM


catalinamoon, this one would surely make the "wee folk" want to dance a jig. Well done poetess!! Chris

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Tracey
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7 posted 2002-02-19 10:19 PM


Well, being half Irish, I thought I might take you up on this challenge and find some time to write while I’m in Florida at the end of the week. Unfortunately, I have just discovered there are three outlet malls, and a British pub near my hotel, so I think that is where my time is going to go!!!…that is indeed time well wasted!!
Have to say, I love your poem, it does bring visions of the emerald isle to mind.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2002-02-19 10:39 PM


Being Irish, this is a challenge I can sink my teeth into!

I like yours very much...

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9 posted 2002-02-19 10:55 PM


WOW! That was SO cool!
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10 posted 2002-02-19 11:48 PM


Now that is a vacation I can only dream of taking.  It also reminds me of a series of books by Nora Roberts that I've recently read.  Enchanting it is, or would be I'm sure.  Neat poem Sandra~
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11 posted 2002-02-20 01:54 AM


Cat,
what a great challenge and poem. However I know nothing about Ireland except it's green and wet, so I will leave the challenge to the experts.
Keth

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12 posted 2002-02-20 06:16 AM


I'm no expert either but have heritage from there..Maybe I can come up with something but this is just stunning Sandra.  Well done.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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13 posted 2002-02-20 10:59 AM


This is just fabulously beautiful!  
I think I will attempt to answer your challenge

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-02-20 11:08 AM


Beautiful writing Sandra
Ireland has that certain magic ... to be sure!

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15 posted 2002-02-20 11:11 AM


Ah Sandra!  This one touches my heart for sure!  Well one!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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16 posted 2002-02-20 04:03 PM


well. . . this is wonderful. . . and that's no Blarney lass. . .

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Marsha
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17 posted 2002-02-20 06:12 PM


Sandra darling girl I would say that this is one of your best but you’d say I always say that. And the only thing I know of Ireland is that Dublin is a fun place to be, they have this fountain of a semi-clad lady lying in water. The local nickname for it is The floozy in the Jacuzzi And that Ireland ‘tis wet a lot of the time, which accounts for why it’s green. One thing that always puzzles me is when we hear about an attack here in England or there in Ireland, it’s always claimed that the real IRA have done it, so are there somewhere a fake IRA? But other than that I don’t know a not a lot. Oh and the Guinness tastes far better there than anywhere else

This is a fabulous poem darling girl absolutely fabulous, well done

Absolutely first class writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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