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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I float, aimless in a sea of entropy As I hear in the distance a cacophony The sound of pain, anguish and cruelty As the lies echo over my endless sea I swim, through endless Oblivion Moving endless towards the setting sun As chaos and hate flow towards me Into the depths of Oblivion I flee http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* incredibly powerful poem..if I may, I would title it Endless Oblivion...Absolutely stunning and easy to feel as there are times this is how I have felt but could never have put it as well as your words have...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Samson, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found peace and joy and are now comforted with hope! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samson, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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