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Startime
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0 posted 2002-02-19 01:23 PM


Within The Silence

Within the silence of my heart
searching for a hidden desire
A thought, a wish, I may impart
and in the future might acquire

Within the silence I hear beats
that will tell me I’m still living
To carry on among defeats
is this human made for giving

Within the silence of my sighs
I reach out with gentle passion
Still there’s silence within my cries
that flow from me with compassion

Within the silence of my mind
mysteries of love I wander
There is a need among mankind
to write about it and ponder

Within the silence of my tears
whispers of inner needs I send
With strength I silence all my fears
letting words, I write, help me mend

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2002 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-02-19 01:27 PM


Dont you just love being a poetess?..i do..enjoyed your words as always karen.. hugss

                  ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-02-19 01:28 PM


StarTime~

'There is a need among mankind
to write about it and ponder

Within the silence of my tears
whispers of inner needs I send
With strength I silence all my fears
letting words, I write, help me mend'


Indeed ... we share so much through our writing~
Write on, sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Kathleen
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3 posted 2002-02-19 01:29 PM


in the silence, we hemorrhage, in the poetry we bleed and in the release we heal.  Beautiful, Karen!

Kathleen
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"My God is an awesome God"

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-19 01:40 PM


Victoria...Oh yes, indeed I do...there is nothing like writing from the vision of your heart...Thank you...**big hugs**

Marge...I think poets are blessed because we are so free to express so much that comes from deep within..the passions of our feelings pour through out pens like a healing balm....**big hugs**

Kay...I could feel the muse bursting through your response...you must write it..Your words a flowing with such strength....I love you, dear one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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