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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-19 11:41 AM



      Forever
forever
came in
an instant
wasn’t escorted
by fanfare
and at
that moment
I knew
it was there


"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-02-19 11:49 AM


there is no fanfare
only my eyes are speaking
and forever shall

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-02-19 11:54 AM



starting this moment
an eternity to come
two beat as one heart

Startime
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Canada
3 posted 2002-02-19 11:58 AM


*sigh* so beautiful and so perfect...magnificent writing...I love it...**big hugs** Forever is just that simple

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2002-02-19 12:12 PM


OneSlickLady~
Oh yes !  Oh yes !  Oh yes !
You'd have to know I'd LOVE THIS ONE~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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5 posted 2002-02-19 12:54 PM




(smiles) YES!!! Oh Helen, this is sooooooo beautiful, I wish forveer to shine in your heart forever and for the beauty of love to simply fill you with happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana
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6 posted 2002-02-20 10:22 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-02-20 10:27 AM


Slick,
You scored on this one. Very good.

strbbux
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8 posted 2002-02-20 12:16 PM


Wow oneslick, I wish I could say that much in a few words. Great work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
9 posted 2002-02-20 12:18 PM


WOW!!
heather_kitn
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In The Kokapelli's Song
10 posted 2002-02-20 12:42 PM


Forever, never, eternity
they all walk amongst us
on their slippered feet
but we always know, don't we...


Nicely said...I like this one.

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
           ~Picasso~

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just out of reach
11 posted 2002-02-20 01:58 PM


  Perfect!!!  Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
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12 posted 2002-03-06 03:17 PM


Yes, not much more to be said, nice 1slick. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2002-03-06 04:47 PM


Ah...now I see what inspired Interloper's response....wonderful
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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