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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-02-19 10:17 AM


Good morning my love
Dreaming with you is better
Than dreaming of you

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-02-19 11:01 AM


Moonlight Romeo - liked this much. Beautiful words...

BC

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2 posted 2002-02-19 11:01 AM


Nice. I almost feel like I should not be reading these, they are just for Juliet.
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with you
3 posted 2002-02-19 11:02 AM


together, we dream
in the early morning light
whispers....of last night

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4 posted 2002-02-19 12:13 PM


*sigh* Oh my gosh...did you ever say it right...dreams are wonderful but they cannot even touch reality....**big hugs** I am sure she loved waking up to you too...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-02-19 12:47 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever share the sweetest dreams with your love of your life! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-22 01:22 PM


evening Moonlight
your stars whisper in my ears
dreaming together



"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (02-22-2002 01:26 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-02-22 01:55 PM


Lovely.  Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-02-22 02:00 PM


I love your haiku! says a lot in few words  

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-22-2002 02:00 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-02-22 08:18 PM



Beautiful!  I love this!

Take care,
Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2002-02-22 08:22 PM


beautiful..... very beautiful
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11 posted 2002-02-22 08:22 PM


Yes I agree, and I love it.
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12 posted 2002-02-22 09:18 PM


Ditto!
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13 posted 2002-02-22 09:47 PM


Sooooooo true...
A sweet haiku always brings plenty of smiles out on us readers here...
*~coco~*

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14 posted 2002-02-25 09:37 AM


Thank you everyone
My work thanks all of you too
Night will come again

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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