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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2002-02-19 07:49 AM



I depart from
the myth of time
as the clock strikes midnight
twice
in the fantasy of loving you
I succumb to desire
and I lose track of myself
fogetting to come back to reality
and guard my heart
I sink into you
deeper each time
And with each kiss
you take me farther
from this life
and I die in your arms
slowly
full of passion
I slide
into heaven or hell
at the mercy of what
ecstasy brings
I become whatever you want me to be

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-19 07:56 AM


Walker,
She'll love that, good write.

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-02-19 08:30 AM


Walker darling boy this is utterly utterly fabulous writing, this is such a sweetly tenderly written poem. You really are an excellent writer I simply adore these poems of yours, they are Perfect poetry

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Duncan
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3 posted 2002-02-19 11:08 AM


You get on these rolls sometimes, walker...pure poetry!  Absolutely loved this!
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-19 11:42 AM


Wow!
GR8 stuff!
Hmmmm...
Whatever I want you to be?
~*~
I want you to be
the happiest of persons
alive to your love
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-02-19 12:39 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I know this is bound to melt his heart forever, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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