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bow_down
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0 posted 2002-02-19 06:08 AM


NOTHINGNESS

world of nothingness
nothing much more little less
no lies no broken promises
no agony no loneliness
no mess no stress...
bring me to the world of nonexistence
cause i hate livin in this world of pretense
i build blocks of subconcious defense
against stimuli tracked by my subliminal sense
a world where there aint no
no she no he no me no you
no nothing but nothing
if there be something that'd be nothing
non-existense dont even exists in this world
no senseless meanings no meaningless words
no wars no conflicts no hate
no prophecies no predestined fate
no faith no laws no evil
no god no angels no devil
no right no wrong
no weak no strong
no fallacy no truth
trees of nothingness...no fruit
i wonder if you'll dare live in this non-existing lair
breathe nothing no air
cause deep in all us dwells no care
id rather stay in here and be one with nothing
id rather be like this than try to be something
i represent whats real and that be nothing
nothingness is our world where realness aint a thing
i represent nothing for nothing is real
but it seems like nothing aint no big deal
for nothing is nothing in nothingness
as would have been anything that is senseless
am i making sense or i making nothing?
when i speak of nothing have you got something?
am i senseless am i saying something?
either way... that aint nothing!!!

[This message has been edited by bow_down (02-19-2002 06:12 AM).]

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Chris2
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1 posted 2002-02-19 06:12 AM


great!!!
i'm almost fascinated by this overwhelming creation!!!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-02-19 07:02 AM



While we may see opposite ends of the spectrum, this is nothing short of a Welcome to Passions!  I think you'll like it around here!  Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-02-21 11:00 PM


This sort of reminds me of "Imagine" by John Lennon. Welcome to our humble home.
doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-02-21 11:06 PM


hey... wow!! this ain't nothing, that's for sure!! it's something else indeed!!

really cool write, here!... sorta spirtually in a realm of nothingness filled with the something of everything all at once!

welcome to the blue pages...

i'll look for more from you!

(i write a lot myself about nothing and something and everything and all, so the theme sounded familiar...hehe... and y'know what? you came to similar conclusions ..... or something... *grin)

loved it!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-02-21 11:39 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Very interesting first post.  I look forward to seeing more of your work here on the blue pages.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

amusemi
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6 posted 2002-02-21 11:53 PM


Yes, welcome...what a stupendous first post.  I will be pondering this for quite some time I'm sure.  There are so many levels here...impressed!!!
RosePetal
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7 posted 2002-02-22 12:44 PM


whoa, I read this twice now and I really like it! I can see that Im going to love your poetry. WELCOME!! Make yourself comfortable and enjoy yourself
vlraynes
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8 posted 2002-02-23 03:39 AM



bow_down-
This is excellent...I love it!
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Midnitesun
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9 posted 2002-02-23 03:51 AM


Congratulations on an excellent write about nothing. Except it really is something, the way you put this together. Interesting first post. Welcome to Passions, where you can unload your mind with some more of this nothing stuff. You'll have many readers.
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