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Ballerina Roses |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Why does the wind whisper your name? whispering haunting words of love whispers of ballerina roses quietly dancing in the fallen snow and the chill of wintry nights becomes passion rising within a breeze ablaze with the fever of your lips Why does the wind whisper your name? in the shadows of what could have been when I was she and you were mine entwined within a foolish dream while the clown of fate was laughing in the wings of "I told you so" as velvet petals bled upon my heart "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-19-2002 09:55 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Victoria...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, this is a bittersweet beauty. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Why does the wind do that to us? It's a plot. That's it! You said it well, Vic. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, it too always amazes me how love can call to us in such an exlusive way yet sometimes it just seems to bleed! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a graceful wonderful poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Lovely bittersweet. Enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you james...hugs dee...thank you for peeking in hugss sandra..ha you are funny ...hugss noah...hugss  sy...thank you so much..im glad you enjoyed..hugs |
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Kathleen Junior Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 20Indiana |
enjoyed this Victoria, your poetry is always soft, delicate..... Kathleen |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Victoria... even when you write sad.. it has a gentle tone to it. Good writing. alan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Really enjoyed this one bunches~ The winds of remember encircle us~ Lovely thoughts, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you dear kathleen..so nice to hear from you as always hugs alan ..thank you for your kind comments..i try not to be vindictive ha.. thank you marge...i didnt see you sneak in haa..good to hear from you ...hugss.. [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-19-2002 01:12 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you paint gentle emotions with the fine paint brush of your words..this poem is so incredibly tender and beautiful with a yearning quality to it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Some very beautifully painted images within the folds of bittersweetness...very nicely written! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
as velvet petals bled upon my heart Oh, how I love this poem!! Awesome. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
karen..oh thank you so much..you are too kind hon..hugss dulcie..thank you for peeking in..nice to hear from you as always hugs chris..thank you and im glad you enjoyed hugs |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria So much beauty in your words and also so much sadness. This was very heartfelt. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Im glad you enjoyed Sue..i wrote it last night about midnight ha..a little tired at the time..ha hugs |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"entwined within a foolish dream while the clown of fate was laughing in the wings of "I told you so" as velvet petals bled upon my heart" Victoria, these are wonderful lines. lovely. floria Floria |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
such pain can love bestow...such joy can it create...longing but wonderful poem !! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - glad I stopped by to read this. Sad and lovely at the same time;. BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you floria..pleased you enjoyed ..hugss always nice hearing from you brian..thank you for your nice comments.. bill..thank you and im glad you enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vic, as always this is just so soft and lovely. Enjoyed this early morning. Hugs to you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Donna..nice to hear from you...hope all is well |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Stunning....I can imagen the long night, and the winds whisper.... HUGSLauren~ Step through the |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you vandana and lauren so much for peeking in...pleased you both enjoyed |
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