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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-02-19 01:15 AM

A Life Complete

Jin if you won't marry me I'll die.
Jin if you won't marry me I'll cry.
Jin if you won't marry me please tell me why.
Then I wouldn't lay awake at night
wondering why you said goodbye.
I could probably go to sleep
right after I cry.

Jin if you will marry me that would be neat.
Jin if you would say yes to me that would be sweet.
And as I lay in your arms each night I would be
thankful to live a life complete.

JamesLee
February18
2002

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2002-02-19 06:25 AM

A sweet..sweet love song..so hopeful. Jin needs to say Yes! Hugs to you poet.

Sincerely,
Regina

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2002-02-19 12:19 PM

James,

How could she say no to such a sweet soul???

I hope she says yes. Nice write

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-02-19 12:21 PM

**big big hugs** I so hope she says yes...she will be getting such a romantic and wonderful man...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-19 12:52 PM

(sigh) Oh James, I know deep down with all my heart that she will say yes and she will marry you and want to share a lifetime of joy with you because you have such a loving heart! (big hugggssssss) I hope it all works out for you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, GOOD LUCK! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

5 posted 2002-02-19 01:50 PM

Just keep writing, you never know, she might say yes. (hope so!)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-19 01:56 PM

Ah James...I really hope she says 'yes' and soon!
This is soooo romantic, yet full of longing.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-02-19 08:34 PM

Thank you Regina, Tara, Startime, Noah, Dulcinea and Nancy for the nice responses.
She better say yes or I'll die...ha...ha..
Seriously I haven't ask her yet but I want to and I am trying to understand the feelings in my heart...I really do love her and some day I might just ask her and we'll see what happens...I'm interested in how I will feel six months from now...one year from now...will my love be stronger...will we be closer...James

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-02-19 08:41 PM

James, I do hope she says yes...good luck, this is a loving poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-02-20 02:15 PM

enjoy

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2002-02-20 03:05 PM

James.. this is a wonderful read. I wiah you the best my friend
alan

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