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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-02-18 10:22 PM

I miss the warmth of the summer sun
and always, I miss you more.
My thoughts wander far and away from today
allowing me to glide into the silk folds of your arms
where the breath of summer breathes
and the night settles down around us.

Quietly escaping, giving into the time
there is a gentleness where passion plays
that graces my soul briefly.
It is a different kind of love that keeps me warm.

Throwing caution to the wind
where our hands roam and interlocked
touching the dampness of tears
exposing my vulnerability and the scars of my past.
Filled with the trembling from your touch.

There is an easy laughter we share
it comes from knowing;
the extent of what is and simply is not.
These are my tomorrow's memories.

At times I fear your leaving
my emotions swarm, flooding my mind,
afraid the moment may never come again.
The very moments that I savor when I'm with you
are the same ones that slip beside me
when I'm missing you.....more.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-18-2002 10:45 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-18 10:25 PM

(big hugggssssss) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now love has come to your heart and now you forever cherish these sweet memories again and again with glee and now you feel comfortable forever in his arms! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-02-18 10:27 PM

Lori,
Incredible! Your best I've seen. I love every word of this...every word. Every single word. Wow...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-18 10:27 PM

ya know, I just love this

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-02-18 10:38 PM

I am very glad that I didn't miss this one. It's a work of heart art.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-18-2002 10:39 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-02-18 10:52 PM

Now now Noah dear this is NOT sad.
Thank you for your sweet words.

Larry~ That's a pretty heady compliment,
so you mean to say it might be worth a bump?
Thank you dear freind.

SEA~ I said to you way back when,
I think we're on the same page, or at least in the same book.

Ya know?

Midnitesun~ Now how can I thank you enough for such a nice reply?
It means a lot and I do thank you muchly.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-18-2002 10:53 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-02-18 11:53 PM

ya, I think so too

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2002-02-19 12:00 PM

I hear an echo, distant yet near ...
a calling ... "more, more, MORE!!!"

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-02-19 12:09 PM

This is absolutely delightful, Lori...
I soaked up every word.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-19 12:27 PM

BluesSerenade - you do write some beautiful poetry.

BC

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-19 01:46 AM

One of my favorites too hon..nicely done ..i read it twice..hugs

~Vic

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-02-19 03:10 AM

Enjoyed...James

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

12 posted 2002-02-19 03:26 AM

Blues Serenade, I know these quiet moments well. This is great, a keeper for sure.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

13 posted 2002-02-19 06:33 AM

This is so beautiful..delicate yet strong in deep emotion. I admire your writing. It is has so many elements of poetic strength.

Sincerely,
Regina

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2002-02-19 01:59 PM

SEA~

Ctowen~ Thanks for rooting me on!

Lyra~ Well I'm trying to get happy, and by golly I think it's working.
Thank you.

BC~ That is a nice compliment and I appreciate it so much, considering I tend to pick myself apart.

Victoria~ Thanks a bunch, I'm grateful for the time you take to always read me.

James~ Thank you muchly.

Dee~ Thank you for keeping it and enjoying the moments.  I thank you for leaving such a nice reply.

Regina~ Coming from such a talented writer as yourself, I'm flattered.
It's nice to hear from you and thank you.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-19-2002 02:00 PM).]

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