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Shores of Alone, Revisited
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Shores of Alone, Revisited |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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They met upon shores of alone and gave eachother then their hearts for years ago, it was foretold this time, they nevermore would part. As waves lapped gently at their feet and moonbeams drifted overhead they walked forward, to life anew while peacefully, their souls were led. Two unloved lovers brought unto a resolution momentous The shores are not so lonely now they shall allow for nothing less. The seer had said it would be so though both had scoffed with their own fright At last, the time had come to pass together, walking through the night. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know deep down with all my heart this love will come true for you and you will forever walk on shores with love close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, keep the faith always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, what a beautiful yet haunting tale you tell. Very well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I like this. Some things are indeed inevitable. Nice write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Absolutely lovely, Sandra  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I drifted into this so easily....Absolutely magnificent...gives me something to dream on...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think we’ve all been on the shores of alone, too frightened to open our hearts. I like the happy ending in your story and hope there’ll be an equally happy ending for your heart. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is such a peacefulness to your words, some days I would prefer to be left alone to walk along the shores. Pretty!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes its the short walks that turn out to be the most rememberable. I would have to agree with Blue, sometimes the walk is best felt alone. I hope you find the walk thats best for you, and most rememberable! Always!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - nice write. Compliments to your muse... BC |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sandra, thanks for taking us here again. This is lovely. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
To be united finally in this vast world..seems a miracle. This was so believing and hopeful. I love what you created here. Sincerely, Regina |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sandra~ The last verse breathes with hope, may you take comfort on your shores and find your peace there. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, I loved this when I read it the first time. It seems even more lovely now. Thanks for sharing. ((Newell)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my Sharon, I knew after I read the first line that this would be wonderful. AND IT IS. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
As waves lapped gently at their feet and moonbeams drifted overhead they walked forward, to life anew while peacefully, their souls were led. Beautiful beautiful stuff, Sandra  ~loads of hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sandra I love the thought behind this soul dipped walk, and I believe it happens. Hugs! |
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