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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-18 08:09 PM


Kiss Of A Goddess
By: Noah Eaton
2/18/02

Come hither, my fair lady
I promise I will always be faithful
You have my word, my sweet darling
In the wake of love we will be bountiful

In the breast of the rising sun
We will wear our dreams as a brooch
We will run in the meadow saffron of our Land of Canaan
Skipping to the sun, together as lovers we will boast

There are so many words to describe your sweetness
And it is never easy to specify
Even so, from my calliope I will forever recite loves lyrics
All for you, my sweet love, until the end of time

Forever may you wear my love as a corsage
To remind you that you'll always be my goddess
I vow to make you happy forever and a day
I will always be your faithful Adonis


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 09:05 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-18 08:21 PM


What a lucky woman she is, too. That last stanza should be saved for wedding vows.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-02-18 08:29 PM


So romantic, Noah..I believe you must be a poet, and she, lucky!
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3 posted 2002-02-27 09:02 PM


Awwwwwww, you are such a sweetheart, I love you sweetie! kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss

your guinevere,
Joanna

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4 posted 2002-02-27 09:43 PM


Mistletoe angel
My first post to you did not go through. thankyou for your kind words.This was so awsome it took my breath away. Where was my husband when god was passing out romantics?
hehe,
Lia

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5 posted 2002-02-27 09:47 PM


Hi Noah,
Great spice   ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-02-28 01:38 AM


This is nice Noah...James
Spirit Of Twilight
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7 posted 2002-02-28 04:47 AM


Noah,
This is simply exquisite! What a lucky woman she is!Keep writing!
Neha

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8 posted 2002-02-28 06:28 AM


Noah  it's  wonderful to be in love...enjoy it *s

M

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9 posted 2002-02-28 01:17 PM


You have the blessed gift of giving words to the feelings of your heart.This is a devine gift be greatful you possess it.

paladin

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