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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-18 07:57 PM


Red roses on the mantlepiece
Create such a romantic mood
With good wine and good loving
There's no need for real food

The special of the day
Will be our smorgasboard of love
How we'll soar the peaks of passion
As you lift me high above

The heady scent of gardenia
Fills this sensually glowing place
How beautiful you look in profile
As the firelight frames your face

Beads of sweat begin to travel
Between the centre of my chest
Bodies entwined in love's rapture
Upon one another we now rest

With the embers slowly burning
We'll move slowly towards the floor
As our passions are ignited
I'll remain with you forever more

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-02-18 07:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, your poems are always such a delight to read and I know this is only the appetizer of all the lovely words you have yet to write, I love them all so so so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20
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2 posted 2002-02-18 08:02 PM


I could feel the heat in this one Sue...and it wasn't from the fireplace !!!!!Sensual and romantic....tender and loving!!!
Larry C
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3 posted 2002-02-18 08:30 PM


Sue,
So much heat the fire is ornamental! Great write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-02-18 08:36 PM


Beautiful write here Sue...wonderfully romantic!   Enjoyed!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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