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Startime
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0 posted 2002-02-18 07:27 PM


Lips Of Poems

A shiver flows through me
as vision comes to life
I can feel gentle warmth
embraced in arms of words

Tingles of sensation
bring forth a gentle sigh
Know pleasure from being
kissed by the lips of poems

A flame of passion burns
as desire builds within
I’m melting from the fire
touched by verses rhyme

A tender stroke of pen
drawing my heart to thoughts
My spirit is often
caressed by unknown love

Karen Torbiak 2002

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2002 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
brianbeaudry
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1 posted 2002-02-18 07:32 PM


as is mine dearest friend...as is mine!!!!You know I love this Karen...greatly!!!!
Startime
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2 posted 2002-02-18 07:34 PM


**big big hugs** to you dearest, Brian...I am so glad you liked it...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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3 posted 2002-02-18 07:52 PM


Wonderful write, Karen. I always get so much from your poems.
Sandra

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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4 posted 2002-02-18 08:03 PM


Hello Karen

This was brilliant!  Your words always paint the most vivid pictures and this was no exception.  You summed up very well how I also feel when I read work such as yours.

Take care........Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-02-18 08:11 PM


Indeed, Karen, indeed. I, too, am deliciously kissed, caressed and taken into the skies above the stars in the ecstasy of God's purest love, by poetry. And as I read your poems, Karen, my soul rejoices, because I know how wonderfully that you invoke this glorious feeling of love. I am indeed captured by the very essence of your sweet, sweet soul as it flows through me by way of your loving pen. More, Karen, more! ")
((Karen))
-newell  

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-02-18 08:17 PM


Gosh I love the way you write!
Just wonderful Karen...Great write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-02-18 08:25 PM


Dear lady,  you so much deserve not only to
see words but to feel them caress your face
and your body...you deserve it all...

Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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8 posted 2002-02-19 01:06 PM


Karen.... this is outstanding. I love the feel of it
alan

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-02-19 01:14 PM


Karen - each one is excellent you write.

BC

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