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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-02-18 06:05 PM


A candlelit room
A scene straight out of a dream
Passions are ignited
Love flows like a tranquil stream

A sensual nibble
On the lobe of my ear
Sweet nothings are whispered
Intended for me alone to hear

Warm breath on my skin
All of my senses coming alive
Pulses are now racing
As love moves into overdrive

A passionate kiss by the firelight
Two souls have now combined
In our galaxy of love
The stars have now aligned

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-18 06:07 PM


You romantic you!!  This is great...a little nibble on your ear...haha..

loved this..

as all of them..

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2 posted 2002-02-18 06:09 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, nothing like a firelight kiss to melt a lovers heart with delight! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true Queen of Romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-19 12:03 PM


Suetang,

     Oh I like this How sensual and romantic this is!

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2002-02-19 12:17 PM


yes, very romantic
EagleOne
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5 posted 2002-02-19 07:00 AM


Ya know, I love it when the stars line up and everything is in balance.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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6 posted 2002-02-20 10:35 AM


enjoy
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-02-20 10:36 AM


very soft and romantic.  Well done!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Ariana
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8 posted 2002-02-20 11:19 AM


Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!  Very nicely done.  Very soft and romantic.  I hope the champagne was cold and the strawberries dipped in chocolate.  
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9 posted 2002-02-20 12:07 PM


Very sensual and truly loving poem. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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