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Someday..........
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Someday.......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Without expectation nor divine intervention I woke without a thought of you and no ache…..in my heart how strange, when recognition was recognized I felt no refalling though it passed through my mind time recalling strange was the feeling of this not missing you and strange the understanding I’d made it to, Someday ~SEA~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmmm, very very nice Sea. "I’d made it to, Someday" lovely write, floria Floria |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
SUSAN!!!!! OMG .....i loved this, as i do all your work! You are truly amazing, and is that you in that PIC  ...your words are gorgeous...as this poem is! I emailed you, did you get it???~!!~~Jeff~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet freind, your gorgeous words always touch my heart and show so many different emotions of love and loss and thought so wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Floria~ thank you very much Jeff~ you are so nice, no sweetie, I didn’t get it yet, I will tomorrow though, ok? Stuff going on here….I have to get off the computer in a sec I'll email you tomorrow!!  Noah~ thank you dear friend |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
strange was the feeling of this not missing you and strange the understanding I’d made it to, In a way it is not such a bad place to be, it sure makes life alot easier. You write so nice SEA~ This was as pretty as the picture. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - stunning and beautiful pic, as this write. I woke up one day and felt the same.. BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, Love the poem and the pic....nice feeling to know that you made it to 'someday.' ~Hugs, Nancy! ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, It is a wonderful feeling isn't it? I rermember the exact day this happened to me. I was so in love with someone and it just wasn't happening. One night I saw him.. and, there was nothing. No sadness or longing... I almost did the conga LOL. Thanks for another great poem Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I had a "someday", too...it was such a relief to not be a prisoner to my own emotions. Beautiful piece...I plan to keep it in my library to remind me where I have been and never hope to go again! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, The land of little regret! Sure helps one's peace of mind. Great write. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what a free feeling....... nicely done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I woke without a thought of you and no ache...in my heart how strange, when recognition was recognized I felt no refalling though it passed through my mind time recalling strange was the feeling of this not missing you ====================================== WHAT???????? NO ACHE???? NO WAY!!! Oh.. I get it!!! you are teasing with me right????? Whew!!...ya had me going there for a minute... I thought you were trying to tell me you werent a moth any more. SEE? you wrote this SO well...that I almost fell for it. (iwihwt)(and believed it was possible) very cool Sea-girlie mothy me "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So..fine! You made it to "someday". Hip, hip hooray for you. You've finally gotten over all The trauma you've been through. Unfortunately I have not So woe and pity me. Each morning I awake I find I still miss my dear Sea. I get dressed and I go outside.. What's there in front of me? The gulls are flying overhead As I stare at the sea. I go down to the coffee shop. "Cafe cubano por mi". The waiter smiles and gives a wink And then he says, "Si! Si!" My son took his exams today In trigonometry. I asked him how it went. He said, "I only got a C." I met a girl last night-asked her To have a drink with me. I asked her what she wanted and She calmly said "CC". Each time something stops working And I need a battery. Forget the D's or double A's I always need a C!!!! My best friend's wife gave birth today And smooth it didn't go So guess what doctors had to do.. A C-section, don't you know? So I don't have a chance in hell Cause everything I do Has some way of reminding me How I am missing you. So when I get involved again Forget the Bea's and Dee's And I can fully guarantee I'll never date a SEA!!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Blues~ yes, makes my life much easier thank you BC~ you are awesome, thank you! Nancy~ yes, it’s a great feeling, thank you Tara~ the conga?! lol yep thanksAmusemi~ thank you very much!! Larry~ definitely peace of mind, thank you Doreen~ thank you for reading Janet~ have no fear, my mothly friend….. I have more aches where this one came from Balladeer~ lol, love that relpy But don’t be so quick with your guarantee |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Beautiful words to remember "someday". I remember mine as if they were only yesterday ... ... thank you for the look forward. Keep a smile, always!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is beautiful ... soft and powerful Love the picture too Thank You |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ctowen~ thank you Connie~ thank you, I love this picture too all of Steve Hanks’ pictures are beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is beautiful~ But you know I'm not falling for it~  Gorgeous thoughts,gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I loved this!!! I have had occasion to be on the receiving end of such redemption... to no longer to miss someone. Very well written. Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful for you...James |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
Wow I thought this was a really good poem, I just wish I was there. Its hard to finally reach that place and congrats on doin it... I hope I will be in the same boat soon |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
Wow I thought this was a really good poem, I just wish I was there. Its hard to finally reach that place and congrats on doin it... I hope I will be in the same boat soon |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
SEA....this is good. I am glad someone found that place. alan |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Very cool! I really enjoyed this one SEA, very well done! |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Hi SEA, long time no chat. I LOVE this one. I'm feeling it right now. Hmm...but I don't know whether this feeling is good or not. It's better to love than not love at all. Isn't there is such similar phrase about that? Write me. halkyon@hotmail.com Eliza Simmons |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't the destination great? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - isn't the human spirit an amazing thing? Awesome poem - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Someday... very nicely done my friend...as usual, I enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This deserves at least one more look Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bravo.... verywell said SEALauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Applauding!!!!!wonderful poem and revelation dear friend, simply beautiful!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you wrote a perfect poem! Frame it! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Sea. And, I love the picture. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could have sworn I posted a reply to this, but I'm back again now to say that this poem really touched my heart...same situation, same feeling, same words that I couldn't get out this way |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hope that if my someday comes...that it feels as good as this poem makes it feel.. Nicely done Sue...and I see that the sea is next to SEA.... |
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