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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-02-18 05:39 PM


You are the weaver of my dreams
Caressing me tenderly throughout the night
I watch you sleeping here beside me
Your face capturing the first rays of light

You are the jewellery that adorns my body
A hidden treasure beneath the sea
As you selflessly give your loving
A priceless gift it is to me

The stunning images one might find
As the sun begins to set
Similar images I have of you
Such a love I'll never forget

You are as smooth as the wine
That compliments a fine meal
All my love I will surrender
For my heart is yours to steal

Such exquisite sensations I experience
As you press your lips to mine
Your eyes they are like sapphires
In the candlelight how they shine

The brightest star in the constellation
The one I always want to be around
As each day I count my blessings
For this special love I've found

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-18 05:43 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever be the brightest star in your hearts constellation and adorn your dreams like jewels you will forever cherish and adorn upon your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-18 05:54 PM


BUMP   this is splendid, as is all your work!
strbbux
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3 posted 2002-02-18 05:56 PM


"As each day I count my blessings
For this special love I've found" lovely lines as is the entire poem Sue, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-02-18 06:12 PM


Noah - You are always so very gracious in your comments.

Jeff - How very humbled am I by your lovely words.

Floria - Thank you being so very supportive and gracious.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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