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My Choice
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My Choice |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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My Choice he silently watched and held my hand knowing that the tears were for the love of another man but he would not go would not leave my side even when I had hurt him crushed him deep inside no pushing no shoving no loud tone in his voice just waiting for me me and my choice quietly there in his silence loving only me waiting for me to let go and finally be free "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Awesome way of describing this type of situation, I could almost feel the emotions... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very emotional Lady and he must truly love you. what a guy. lovely poem full of emotion. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, he must really love you so much and understand how you feel to know you didn't crush him and being faithful to your pleas! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
He's a keeper, Helen!!! LOved this!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is very good. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! It takes a very special man to stand by you while you make your choice...Stunning. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
wrenching . . . but you tell the story well, as always. e |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
I'm new to this reply thing so its hard for me to express in words how this poem made me feel all i can say is wow. |
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