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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-02-18 03:37 PM


How kindly the day seems
Once you have rested in the kind speak of night's arms.
Dreams of peace may not, in abundance, have grown
But it was simple and beautiful enough just to sleep.
When eyes close, we tend to hear a different hum
Voices transport themselves into other bodies
And the symbols of our lives walk beside us
On paths of emotions as we incline our ears
Toward the song of learning about ourselves.
How kindly the day seems
Once we have heard the voices we hold dear in our dreams.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-18 03:41 PM


I have to agree...certainly that is the
feeling...Let me see if I remember your
first name.....Starts with a J?

Nicely done...enjoyed...

Temptress
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2 posted 2002-02-18 04:12 PM


Well...at least you remember the first letter, eh?
Thank you for your time with this.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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3 posted 2002-02-18 05:26 PM


yes. . . my name does begin with a "J". . .

it's nice when a simple smile can bring so much. . . hope there are more of them. . . great work. . .

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4 posted 2002-02-18 05:57 PM




YAY!!! Oohhhhhhh...I just love how siles are contagious, I always feel so happy when I dream of love and all my freinds for in the morning I feel like I can embrace the whole world with cheer! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this made me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-18 05:59 PM


once again...you did it!! MADE ME SMILE!
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6 posted 2002-02-18 05:59 PM


Very very nice Temptress, love this also as I do all your work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-02-19 10:51 AM


oh beautiful day
morning after our dreaming
and of our learning
we listened to emotions
thoughts we hold inside dearly

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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