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Drink It In
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Drink It In |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Drink It In Laying in the sun Drinkingit all in Feeling it creep up Upon my skin Starts with my toes A fimiliar path As if it knows Warmth spredding to my calf To my thigh As if to please Seems to stop As if to tease Heat spreding quickly Up that zone On my stomach Where once so toned Wide and fast, heat Spreds to my chest Beads of sweat Run down my breasts Tickleing my neak Causeing a need As if to summon Dracula to feed Come join me? Drink it in too? This place here... Perfect for me and you By Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 July 8, 2001 |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Ha, ha! This is a killer. You know, of course, what happens to Dracula in the sunlight. Love it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your words penetrate with warmth. Reminds me of the first time out in the sun after the winter has passed. I literally feel like I'm thawing out. I really liked the innuendos and the underlying currents in this. Pray for sun!!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You Both Very Much I love the sun I love the Night sky and Moon Kinda a mix of both worlds : ) Thanks |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love the figurative language you put in your words, sweet freind, this is pretty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always sheer sunshine! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Noah, You are always sooooo very kind Thank You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Zinsser - reminds me of when I spent some time in Florida. By the way, where are you, I'll take you up on your request and join you in the sun... BC |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Bill, LOL Thanks for enjoying the write : ) Thank You |
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