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0 posted 2002-02-18 01:48 PM



Your Kiss

Your breath washing over me
Moments before your warm lips
Meet mine with velvet softness
Moving with graceful temptation
Drawing me into your want
Our souls swirl together as one
Our tongues meeting in dance
Slowly stroking the desires
Of the passion that lies beneath.
As I lose myself in your seduction.


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-18-2002 01:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-18 01:57 PM


girl, this is so sensual..... love it
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2 posted 2002-02-18 02:29 PM


Delicious!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-02-18 02:35 PM


This is yummy! LOL   Nice work, Tara *hugs*

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2002-02-18 03:22 PM


Tara...you cannot get much more passionate
than this without getting bumped over to
the other place...this is sensuous and very
warm...

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5 posted 2002-02-18 05:03 PM


Sounds like a kiss to remember...James
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6 posted 2002-02-18 05:07 PM


awwwww, this is great.  Keep up the good work.
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7 posted 2002-02-18 06:07 PM


I'm glad you all like it Thanks for stopping in to read.

Tara

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8 posted 2002-02-18 06:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a soft and sensual treasure from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) May he forever shower your heart with kisses, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-02-18 07:07 PM


rosepetals25 - Ok, this is a pretty descriptive kiss. So, pucker up....

BC

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10 posted 2002-02-18 07:12 PM


Yup...just about sums up my wife's lips!!!You have penned the perfect kiss Rosepetals25
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11 posted 2002-02-18 09:25 PM



What a kiss!  This is so awesome. You go girl

You just keep getting better and better with your poetry...love inspires you well!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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12 posted 2002-02-18 11:53 PM


Thank you all for stopping in I'm so glad you enjoyed

Tara

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13 posted 2002-02-19 01:09 AM


well woohoo
can i have another?
-Dave

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14 posted 2002-02-19 07:26 AM


I love this poem.
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